Wil Action Pose draft

Well in this drawing I was aiming to do another action pose for practice. But I did in a different pose, but I found this pose a bit more difficult compare to Luna's action pose.

So the drawing was a struggle to a point of smudges, and the paper about to rip. So I might plan to do make a more cleaner action pose of this. I think I messed up a bit on Wil's left leg and his face, specifically his left eye. And also his perspective angle as well.

The two light and dark energies forming in his right hand are not magic. There are more of the particles of light and dark he's controlling.

Critique and review will be appreciated.

P.S. If any of you are curious as to why he has a sling back pack and a side pack. The reason is to carry some medical supplies,food, grenades, his M41 Carbine (not sure if it will fit in sling back pack) and some bandiliers (cannot spell this word).